Uma usengakadideki kancane ngalokho okubhalwa ngumuntu wesithathu kubonakala ngendlela eqanjiwe, funda lezi zibonelo zakudala bese uhlola ukuthi umbhali ngamunye ubamba kanjani iphuzu lokubuka.
Izibonelo Zomuntu Wesibili Ukubhala Kusuka EFiction Fiction
I- prose ecacile kaJane Austen inikeza isampuli ephelele yomuntu wesithathu. Nakuba ukuziqhenya nokubandlulula kuyindaba enkulu ka-Elizabeth Bennet, umlandisi akayona u-Elizabeth Bennet.
"Mina" noma "thina" kuzokwenzeka kuphela ngaphakathi kokucaphuno:
Ngesikhathi uJane no-Elizabeth bebodwa, lowo owayenguye, owayeqaphele ekudumiseni uMnu. Bingley ngaphambili, wabonisa udadewabo ukuthi wayemthanda kangakanani. "
Uyilokho nje insizwa okufanele ibe khona, "kusho yena," ohlakaniphile, othokozisa kahle, ojabulisayo; futhi angikaze ngibone imikhuba enjabulo enjalo! - lula kakhulu, ngokuzalana okuhle okunjalo! "
U-Elizabeth waphendula wathi: "Ungumuntu omuhle, okumele insizwa ifanele ibe nayo, uma kungenzeka.
Singathola isibonelo samuva nje somuntu wesithathu uJoseph Heller's Catch-22 . Nalapha, nakuba kuyizindaba zikaJossarian, akasitsheli indaba. Qaphela amatheksthi enkhulumomphendvulwano (isib. "Waphendula" nokuthi "u-Orr uthe.") Emuntwini wesithathu, ngeke ubone "Ngishilo" noma "sathi."
"Wenzani?" U-Yossarian wabuza ngokuqapha lapho engena etendeni, nakuba ebona ngaso leso sikhathi."Kukhona ukuvuza lapha," kusho u-Orr. "Ngizama ukukulungisa."
"Ngicela uyeke," kusho u-Yossarian. "Ungenza ngikhathazeke."
"Ngesikhathi ngiseyingane," u-Orr waphendula, "ngangivame ukuhamba usuku lonke ngifake ama-apula emahlathini ami.
U-Yossarian wabeka eceleni isikhwama sakhe se-musette esasiqale ukukhipha izinto zakhe zangasese futhi wazibophezela ngokusobala. Kwadlula umzuzu. "Kungani?" wazithola ephoqelekile ukubuza ekugcineni.
I-Orr ihlukunyezwe ngokunqoba. "Ngenxa yokuthi bangcono kunezikhwama zehhashi," waphendula.
Okokugcina, qhathanisa lokhu nomzekelo wokuqala womuntu kusuka ku- Moby-Dick . Kule ndaba, indaba iyatshelwa ngu-Ishmael, futhi ukhuluma ngqo nomfundi. Konke kunombono wakhe: singabona kuphela lokho akubonayo nalokho asitshela khona. Imiklomelo yenkulumompikiswano, yebo, ihlukahluka phakathi kokuthi "Ngathi," lapho u-Ishmael ekhuluma, futhi "waphendula," lapho omunye umuntu ekhuluma.
"Mnumzane!" wathi mina, "uhlobo luni lwesahluko - ingabe uhlale egcina amahora afanele kangaka?" Kwakuyinkimbinkimbi ngehora leshumi nambili.
Umnikazi wezindlu waphinde waphinde wamshaya nge-chuckle yakhe enomsoco, futhi kubonakala sengathi uyangikhathaza kakhulu into engaphezu kwengqondo yami. "Hhayi," waphendula, "ngokuvamile uyinyoni yokuqala - i-airley yokulala futhi i-airley ikhuphuke-yebo, yiyo inyoni okubamba imbongolo." Kodwa kwaze kwaba sebusuku waphuma ukuhamba, ubona, futhi Angiyikubona ukuthi yini emoyeni egcina impela, ngaphandle kokuthi, kungenzeka, ayikwazi ukuthengisa ikhanda lakhe. "
"Angikwazi ukuthengisa ikhanda lakhe? - Yiluphi uhlobo lwezindaba ezithandayo?" ukuthukuthela okukhulu. "Ingabe uzenza sengathi uthi, umninimzi, ukuthi lo mculi we-harpooneer empeleni ubhekene nalo Mgqibelo ebusuku obusisiwe, noma kunalokho ngeSonto ekuseni, ngokuhamba ngekhanda lakhe kulo muzi?"
Iqhinga lokuqinisekisa ukuthi uhlala usebenzisa umlando womuntu wesithathu esiqeshini sezinganekwane ukukwenza okuphelele ukufunda ngokulalela kuphela iphuzu lokubuka.