Bhala iNhloko
Funda iskripthi sakho ngokuzwakalayo. Ingabe kulula ukuyiqonda nje ngokuyizwa ngesikhathi esisodwa kuphela? Ngokungafani nokuphrinta, izithameli zezindaba ze-TV zinombono owodwa wokuthola indaba.
Yingakho amagama azwakala ngokufanayo kodwa anezincazelo ezahlukene adala ukukhubeka kwendlebe. Amazwi afana nokuthi "cite", "indawo," nethi "sight" kufanele agwenywe uma kunokwenzeka. Imisho emfishane, imisho ye-punchy kulula ukuba indlebe igaye kunamagama amade, anzima kakhulu anemigomo ethembekile.
Gwema i-Passive Voice
Ukubhala izwi ngezwi elimnandi kuhlanganisa ukulandelana okujwayelekile kwesihloko, isenzo, into ekubhaliseni kwezwi esebenzayo. Lokhu kuzwakala njengesifundo esiklasini lesiNgisi, kodwa kwenza ngempela umehluko omkhulu ekubhaliwe kwezindaba.
Umusho wezwi osebenzayo uwukuthi, "Umphangi udubule isibhamu." Uyabona isihloko, isenzo, nento. Isigwebo sokuthi, "Lesi sigameko sasixoshwa ngumphangi." Inhloso nezenzo zafika ngaphambi kwesihloko. Ababukeli kufanele balinde kuze kube sekugcineni komugqa ukwazi ukuthi ubani owenze lokho.
Khona-ke ubuchopho babo buzocubungula lolo lwazi ngenkathi bezama ukuhambisana nalokho okushiwo i-newscaster.
Qaphela "ngokuthi" ngomusho. Ngokuvamile lokho kuyinikeza umusho obhaliwe ngezwi elincane.
Sebenzisa i-Present Tense lapho kufanelekile
Izindaba ze-TV zenzelwe ukuzwakala sengathi "manje." Lona omunye umehluko omkhulu phakathi kokusakaza nokuphrinta izindaba zezindaba.
I-newscast ye-6: 00 ntambama idinga ukuzwakala okusha njengokungathi izindaba zivele zivele manje.
Kodwa ingqungquthela yamaphephandaba yameya owakubhekile kwenzeka ngo-2 ntambama. Ukuthambekela kwemvelo ukuloba, "UMeya ubephethe ingqungquthela yezindaba ngaphambili namuhla."
Ngokushintsha ukugxila komusho kulokhu okushiwo ingqungquthela yezindaba, ungafaka umusho ngesikhatsi samanje uphinde unikeze i-punch eyengeziwe. "UMeya uthi ufuna ukushaya intela ngamaphesenti angu-20. Wenza isimemezelo emhlanganweni wesigungu ..."
Lesi sibonelo siqala ngesikhathi samanje se -hook , bese sishintsha esikhathini esedlule. Kubalulekile ukuthi ungamane uphoqe isikhathi samanje kuwo wonke umusho obhalayo. Kungase kuzwakale kungenakwenzeka ngo-6 ntambama i-newscast ithi, "Wenza isimemezelo emhlanganweni wesigameko okwenzeka ngo-2 ntambama."
Bhala Izindaba ngabantu
Kubonakala kusobala, kodwa kulula ukuvumela iskriphthi ukuba ihlukane nokugxila kubantu ababuka izindaba zakho. Uma ababukeli bezwa ukuthi izindaba zakho azizithinti ngqo, zizoyeka.
Ngakho-ke lapho umnyango wezokuthutha wombuso ushumayeza iphrojekthi enkulu yokuthuthukisa ingqalasizinda ehilela ukufaka amabhuloho ezungeze idolobha lakho, ungahle unikezwe ngolwazi lwesikhungo. Kodwa uguqule ube yinto ethile yomuntu siqu futhi enenjongo kubantu basekhaya.
"Ukushayela kwakho emsebenzini noma esikoleni maduzane kuzophephile futhi kube lula, ngenxa yomsebenzi omkhulu wokwenza amabhuloho ethu edolobha abe ngcono." Uthathe ulwazi futhi utshele ababukeli ukuthi lungashintsha kanjani ukuphila kwabo. Sula ama-kits, amagrafu, nedatha ngaphambi kokuba uqale ukubhala ukuze unqume ukuthi kungani ababukeli bakho bazokhathalela ngakho.
Izenzo Zezenzo Engeza I-Verve
Ekubhaliwe kwezindaba, awukwazi ukwenza okuningi kumbono noma into yemisho yakho, kodwa ungacoca izenzo zakho. Ziyingxenye yenkulumo engabangela ukuphila ezindabeni zakho.
Bheka indaba ukuze ubone ukuthi ungashintsha umusho othi "Izakhamuzi zicela imininingwane ..." "Abahlali bafuna izimpendulo." Lolu shintsho olulula luyengeza ukuphuthuma nokusebenza.
Ngaphambi kokuba uthathwe, khumbula indaba yakho kusadingeka ibe nenembile. "Ukufuna" kungase kube namandla kakhulu. Zama, "Izakhamuzi zifuna ukwazi."
Ukusebenzisa "kuwukuthi, bekunjalo," kwakunciphisa umthelela wesenzo. "Izakhamuzi zifuna izimpendulo" zizwakala kangcono kunokuba "Izakhamuzi zifuna izimpendulo."
Qaphela ngezinombolo
Izinombolo zinzima ezindlebeni zababukeli, ikakhulukazi uma ziningi zazo. Yenza iphuzu lakho ngenombolo noma emibili, bese uqhubekela phambili.
Esikhundleni salokho, "Inzuzo yenkampani yayingama- $ 10,470,000, kwaze kwawela ku-$ 5,695,469 ngonyaka," ungenza umzila ube lula, "Inzuzo yenkampani yayingama-dollar ayizigidi ezingu-10 nengxenye, yawela cishe engxenyeni elandelayo ngonyaka. " Umbukeli uthola lo mqondo ngaphandle kokuzwa zonke izinombolo zokugcina.
Kuhle ukuba uthathe izinombolo ezinkulu futhi uhumushe zibe into enenjongo ezethameli. Ngaphandle kokukhomba ukuthi inkampani kagesi ikhulisa amanani nge $ 3.5 million, thatha isikhathi sokuthi ukunyuka kusho ukuthi ikhasimende elijwayelekile lizokhokha imali engu-200 ngonyaka ngonyaka. Yileyo inombolo ethinta abantu kakhulu.
Yeqa ama-Cliches ne-Journalese
Ngisho nabalobi bezindaba abanolwazi bawela emgibeni wokubhala amagama afanayo akhathele nemishwana. Iziphepho ezinamandla zihlale "zihlukumezeka," abakhethiwe kwezombangazwe "baphonsa inqola yabo ngaphakathi kwendandatho" futhi izikhathi emva kobugebengu zenzeke "imininingwane iyisifiso."
Lezo zindlela ezingenalutho zenza ukubhala kwakho kwezindaba kubonakale kungajulile. Beka esikhundleni samagama abantu abavamile abakuzosebenzisa engxoxweni.
Abamaphephandaba bavame ukusebenzisa i-journalist lapho bebhekene nokuchofoza kwamanye imisebenzi bese bephinda baphindze lokho abazwayo. Iphoyisa lingase lisho umsolwa osolwa ngokudubula "wabaleka ngezinyawo." Umsebenzi womlobi wezindaba ze-TV ukushintsha ukuthi "ubalekele." Ukuqiniswa komthetho, uhulumeni, kanye nezimboni zokunakekelwa kwempilo kunendlela yabo yokukhuluma, engafanele iphinde iphindwe emoyeni. Uma kungenjalo, ukubhala kwezindaba zakho kuzwakale sengathi kuqondile kusuka ekukhululweni kwezindaba.
Bhala kuvidiyo
Izindaba eziningi zezindaba ze- TV zifundwa njengoba izilaleli zibuka ividiyo edlala esibukweni. Xhuma amagama kuvidiyo njengokungathi uhola iqembu lokuvakasha.
Lokho kudinga ukwazi ukuthi kuzokwenziwe kusikrini njengoba ababukeli bezwa umbhalo. Uma unalolo lwazi, konke okulula kulula.
Uma ukhuluma ngomsolwa okhohlisayo ngenkathi ividiyo ibonisa ukuthi umsolwa uhamba emgwaqweni nommeli wakhe, uthi, "Umsolwa, ubonwe lapha ngakwesobunxele ehamba enkundleni yommeli nommeli wakhe." Lokho kukhonjiswa kuvidiyo kugcina umbukeli angazibuza ukuthi yiyiphi kulaba bantu ababili umsolwa ngenkathi elahlekelwa kulo lonke indaba.
Umzila onjengokuthi, "Buka ukuthi kwenzekani lapho abacimi bomlilo bezama ukuthola ikhi ngaphandle kwesihlahla," baphoqa amehlo ababukeli emuva esikrinini. Khumbula, abanye abantu banezindaba ezivuliwe ngenkathi befunda iphephandaba noma ukudla okudliwayo. Zithokozise ngethelevishini.
Thengisa indaba
Izintatheli zokuphrinta zingase zibubule ngalesi sici esiyisisekelo sezindaba ze-TV. Emadolobheni amaningi, kunephephandaba elilodwa kepha iziteshi eziningi ze- TV zinikeza izindaba. Lokho kusho kuthelevishini; umlobi wezindaba kufanele futhi athengise umkhiqizo njengento ehlukile futhi ephakeme kumncintiswano.
"Lapho ibhodi yesikole ithi akukho mali yamakhompiyutha eklasini, sanquma ukumba izimpendulo." Umzila onjalo ubonisa ukuthi ithimba lezindaba linobudlova, futhi lithatha isinyathelo ukuze uthole iqiniso.
"Siyena kuphela esiteshini esinevidiyo ye-brawl ngaphakathi kokudla kwasekolishi." Isiteshi se-TV sisebenzisa izikripthi zalo ukulwa nombono wokuthi zonke izindaba zedolobha zifanayo.
Nakuba lokhu kungewona u-journalism ohlanzekile, lokhu kuyisisekelo esiyinhloko sokubhala izindaba esivame kakhulu eziteshini eziningi ze- TV . Qaphela ukuthi i-newscast iyisimiso sethelevishini esingekho nje kuphela esincintisana namanye ama-newscasts kodwa nayo yonke imibukiso ye-TV evulekile ngesikhathi esifanayo. Thengisa ukufakwa njengokuthile okukhethekile.
Hambisa iNdaba Ngaphambili
Indaba yezindaba ye-TV ayinawo "ukuphela" phansi kweskripthi. Ukuphela kweskripthi sakho kumele kuvame ukutshela izethameli ukuthi kuzokwenzekani eduze kwabantu abathintekayo.
"Ibhodi lesikole lizovotela ukuthi ngabe lizonquma yini ukukhokha othisha emhlanganweni walo olandelayo," vumela izethameli zikwazi ukuthi yiziphi izenzakalo okuzozilindela ezilandelayo. Ukushiya lelo qiniso ukushiya izilaleli zilenga.
"Sizoba khona kulo mhlangano futhi sikutshele umphumela wevoti," kuhle ukufaka ukuze ababukeli bakho babuyele izibuyekezo. Lelo gqa liqinisa ukuthi ithimba lakho lezindaba lizohlala phezulu kwendaba hhayi nje ukuliphonsa.
Lokhu kuwumzamo omkhulu wokufaka iskripthi se-30 wesibili. Yize noma ngabe izindaba ze-TV zibonakala zikhona mayelana nevidiyo, ukubhalwa kwezindaba ezimnandi kuzokubeka ngaphezulu kwezinye izindaba zakho futhi kungaba yisihluthulelo sokwakha umsebenzi wakho ngokushesha kunokuba ucabange kungenzeka.