Isibonelo se-Hemingway Dialogue
Isibonelo esilandelayo salokhu indaba kaHemingway "Izintaba njengezindlovu ezimhlophe." Endabeni, indoda nowesifazane bahlala ebhasini lesitimela sesitimela bekhuluma.
Njengoba lesi senzakalo siqhubeka, kuyacaca ukuthi ukhulelwe futhi lo wesilisa ufuna ukuba akhiphe isisu:
"Ubumnandi bumnandi futhi bupholile," kusho lo wesilisa.
"Kuyinto enhle," kusho intombazane.
"Kuyinto elula ngempela, Jig," kusho lo wesilisa. "Akuwona umsebenzi ngempela."
Intombazane ibheka phansi imilenze yetafula ivuliwe.
"Ngiyazi ukuthi ngeke uyicabange, Jig. Akuyona neze into."
Intombazane ayisho lutho.
"Ngizohamba nawe futhi ngizohlala nawe ngaso sonke isikhathi. Bavele bavume umoya futhi konke kungokwemvelo."
"Khona-ke sizokwenzenjani ngemva kwalokho?"
"Sizohamba kahle ngemuva kwalokho."
"Yini eyenza ucabange kanjalo?"
"Yilokho kuphela okusikhathazayo. Yiyona nto kuphela eyenza singathokozi."
Qaphela ukuthi ukukhipha isisu, inqubo, kukhonjiswe kuphela. Lokhu kusiza ukubonisa ukungahambi kahle nesihloko, kodwa futhi kuyinto engokoqobo.
Njengoba kuyinto eyinhloko kuzo zonke zomqondo zabo, kungani bezoyipela? Futhi ngenkathi umlobi ongeyena onomakhono angase acabange ukuthi umfundi udinga ukusetha ngokucacile, i-Hemingway igweme ukunikela eyodwa. Ukwengeza ekubeni yiqiniso, kuyanelisa ngokwengeziwe umfundi.
Ukuhluka Kokukhulumisana Okuthukuthele
Qhathanisa lokho kulesi sigameko sokuphumula kusuka enkundleni yothando:
"Bheka, ngiyazi ukuthi kufanele ngimemele ephathini lami!" wamemeza. "Kodwa uyazonda amaqembu ami. Wenqaba ukungena nami. Awufuni neze ukwenza lutho olumnandi. Kusukela lapho uthenge leyo ndlu ye-movie yakudala, usuphelelwe yisikhathi njengama-movie we-classic owabonisayo lapho. ubulili ... asingeke sihambe lapho. Awusoze wazama noma yini entsha. "
"Mhlawumbe ngenxa yokuthi ngikhathele ngemva kokudlala i-movie yeshashalazi yakudala yonke imini."
"Yikuphi okuhlala ugijimela ebusweni bami. Nginayo imali, futhi ngithengile le ndlu, ngiyigijima." Kuthiwani uma ngingenalo umsebenzi wangempela? "
Cabanga emuva kokuphumula kwakho kokugcina. Wazichaza kangakanani ukuthi kungani izinto ziphela? Kungenzeka ukuthi awuzange ubhale yonke inkinga eyodwa, emisho ephelele, kuleyo mpikiswano yokugcina. Inkhulumomphendvulwano lapha iphathelene nokukhulumisana namaqiniso athile kumfundi, yingakho kungacabangi njengokungokoqobo njengenkhulumomphendvulwano yeHemingway. (Naphezu kokuzivikela komlobi, yikuphi kithi okuzwakalayo njengeHemingway?)