Izinhlobo zeLimi Lokufanisa

Lokhu kuguqulwa kwamagama kubangela ukukhanya kanye nesitayela ekubhaliseni kwakho

Ulimi lokufanisa luyehluka ekuchazweni kwangempela kwamagama ngenxa yokubhala okumibalabala, ukuqhathanisa okuvelele, ukugcizelela, ukucaca noma indlela entsha yokuchaza umqondo noma ukunikeza incazelo ekusetshenzisweni komqondo nge-poetic vibe. Igama elithi "ngokomfanekiso" livela olimini olungokomfanekiso, njengoba "ukukhuluma ngokoqobo" kusho into eyenzeka ngempela.

Njengomlobi weqiniso, kungenzeka ukuthi uzosebenzisa ulimi lokufanisa ezindabeni zakho nasezincwadini zamanoveli - mhlawumbe kanengi kunalokho ucabanga. Izinhlobo eziyisithupha eziyinhloko zolimi olungokomfanekiso zisetshenziselwa izinhloso ezehlukene, futhi ukuqonda amandla abo kukusiza ukuba usebenzise ngayinye yazo umphumela omuhle ekubhaliwe kwakho.

  • 01 Simile

    Umfanekiso ufanisa izinto ezimbili besebenzisa amagama athi "like" noma "njengoba" futhi zijwayele kakhulu olimini lwansuku zonke kanye nezibalo zenkulumo ezaziwayo. Nazi izibonelo ezimbalwa:
    • "Isibhakabhaka sekusasa seqede efasiteleni okwesikhashana nje njengenyosi eluhlaza okwesibhakabhaka iMedithera." - UF. F. Fitzgerald e-"The Great Gatsby "

    • "U-Kate wathinta imicabango yakhe njenge -worm yokulinganisa." - UJohn Steinbeck "e-East of Eden"

    • "I-Real G iyathutha njenge-lasagna." - ULil 'Wayne "ku-6 Foot Foot 7 Foot"
  • 02 Ukufanekisa

    Amathekisthi ahambisana ngokuqondile phakathi kwezinto ezimbili ezingafani namazwi, ungasebenzisi amagama athi "like" noma "njenge." Ukuze uthuthukise amakhono akho wokubhala-izibalo, izibonelo zokutadisha enkulumweni yansuku zonke nasezincwadini, ufunde ngezingozi zezithombe ezixubile kanye Yakha izifanekiselo zakho . Nazi izibonelo ezimbalwa zezifanekiselo eziphumelelayo:
    • "Ukubonakala kwalokhu kubuso esixukwini: Amapetali egumbini elimanzi, elimnyama." - U-Ezra Point "Kulesiteshi seMetro"

    • "Ngiyidwala, ngisesiqhingini." - UPaul Simon engomaweni ethi "Ngingowedwala"
  • 03 Synecdoche

    Uma uke wabiza ibhizinisi ngokuthi "i-suit," ebizwa ngokuthi imoto yomuntu "isethi yamasondo" noma okubhekiswe "kusiqashiwe," uye wasebenzisa i-synecdoche, idivaysi yombhalo osebenzisa ingxenye eyodwa ukubhekisela kulo lonke.
  • 04 Hyperbole

    I-Hyperbole iwukunyanyisa ngenxa yokugcizelela, ukuhlekisa noma umphumela. I-hyperbole ivame ukuzwa ezinkulumweni zansuku zonke - "Ngikutshele izikhathi eziyisigidi ukuhlanza igumbi lakho!" Noma "Ngikhohliwe ukudla kwami ​​kwasemini namhlanje futhi manje ngilamba!" Uma isetshenziselwa ukubhala okungamanga, i-hyperbole ingaba ithuluzi elinamandla , ukuvumela ukuba udale umuzwa ozwakalayo womzwa, isenzo noma ikhwalithi.
  • Ukuqinisekiswa kwe-05

    Uma umlobi esebenzisa umuntu, unikeza izimfanelo zomuntu okuthile okungewona umuntu. Ukwenziwa komuntu kuyindlela ephumelelayo yokwengeza isithakazelo ekubhaliseni kwakho futhi kungaletha ngempela izincazelo zakho ekuphileni. Nazi ezinye izibonelo ezivelayo zokuzenzela umuntu. Ukugcina kulezi zibonelo kungenye yezindlela ezidume kakhulu zokusetshenziswa komuntu ezincwadini futhi kucatshangwa kakhulu ukuthi sekuyingxenye yolimi lwansuku zonke.
    • "Ngangibheke ekukhanyeni kwemoto yasemgwaqeni, futhi ebusweni nasemzimbeni yabantu, futhi ebusweni bami, ngibanjwe ebumnyameni obubethe ngaphandle." - UJames Baldwin ku "Sonny's Blues"

    • "Lezi yizindebe zelwandle, lapho kungekho ndevu ekhula khona. It licks chops zayo ngezikhathi ezithile. "- UHenry David Thoreau" Walden "

    • "Ngo-Ephreli inyanga enonya kunazo zonke." - TS Eliot "Emhlabeni"

  • Izikhathi ezingu-06

    I-pun iyindlela yegama elithi lelisetshenziswa ngamazwi aneziphakamiso ezifanayo noma izincazelo eziningi. USamuel Johnson, owaziwa ngobuningi futhi owaziwayo owaziwa phansi waseBrithani wekhulu le-18, okuthiwa yi-puns ehle kakhulu, kuyilapho umqondisi u-Alfred Hitchcock ebadumisa njengencwadi ephakeme kunazo zonke. Kungakhathaliseki ukuthi uthola ukuthi kukhona ama-tacky and inelegant noma amahlaya angokwemvelo, ama-puns ayindawo yonke futhi, uma esetshenzisiwe kancane, anganezela i-whimsy neyodwa ezindabeni zakho. UShakespeare uyinkosi engekho emthethweni ye-pun.
    • "Manje ubusika bokunganeliseki kwethu kuvezwe ihlobo elikhazimulayo ngaleli langa laseYork." UWilliam Shakespeare "kuRichard III"
    • "Okuncane kunokwenyama, futhi kuncane kunomusa." Shakespeare ku "Hamlet"